>getting light all over

>

Snowboarding in Red Lodge, he moved through a cloud of snow.
Beneath them, the patrol was preparing for a snowboard competition.
Making snow.
**
At home, he showed us the dings on his snowboard (shh, he hit a tree),
the photos on his ipod (shh, it’s like moving through the sound).
**
While looking at the shots, the flood light in the loft burned out.
Changing the bulb with her brother,
she cautioned: Don’t break the light —
we don’t want light to get everywhere.
*****
Photo by Will Faber. Ipod touch.
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About redmitten

author of Cracking Geodes Open, Making Good Use of August, and The Peppermint Bottle. poetry editor for IthacaLit and YB Poetry Journal. website: https://toomuchaugust.wordpress.com

7 responses to “>getting light all over

  1. >Great image. Don't break the light. What a concept!

  2. >Seems like poetry to me!

  3. >Great photo…wonderful poem and really like the play on words.

  4. >the look on my son's face after he got home and showed me this shot on his ipod was mastercard-priceless. he doesn't think he gets poetry, but yeah he does.

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