>ponding on the lowlands


What we sound like when we don’t think anyone is listening. Facebook Status Updates.

Note to Self:

   * stop losing stuff that matters — keep track of your chocolate sooner.

   * chose one POV and stick with it — no wonder there’s ponding on your lowlands.

    * to rise above the triple-tear-off status, learn how to clear out slush.


About redmitten

author of Cracking Geodes Open, Making Good Use of August, and The Peppermint Bottle. poetry editor for IthacaLit. website: https://toomuchaugust.wordpress.com

4 responses to “>ponding on the lowlands

  1. >O no! Never to stick to one POV. How will you grow?

  2. >Free rain here as well…all you can catch! Keep track of your chocolate sooner…this would NEVER happen in this neck of the woods! Summing it all up like this? Simply lovely.

  3. >"baseball-sized hail and midnight skies at five." Hmmm. Poetry and imagery in a facebook status.

  4. >thanks ladies! a friend told me that as writers we should become aware of what words we use frequently and then spend time trying not to use them. (but how does one eliminate both snow AND chocolate from one's vocabulary?!)

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